E2-Large Essay Material Repo

2010

通用模板

2011

范文学习

According to the (bar) chart, the market share of some (domestic) brands in China’s car market experienced changes between 2008 and 2009.

如果嫌第一句太长，可以换成：The bar chart illustrates the changes/shifts in the share of domestic, Japanese and American brands.

(Notably, )The market share of Japanese brands decreased by(slip/shrink/slump) 10% from 35% to 25%. However, the market share of Chinese brands increased by 7% from 25% to 32%. The market share of American brans remained unchanged at 13%.（多元素比例变化横向排列）

The chart shows the strong growth of Chinese car brands. These are the factors responsible for this phenomenon. (介绍原因与观点的衔接句)

Firstly, thanks to technological advances, Chinese car makers have developed high-quality products, thus becoming (“所以”句式的简洁写法)competitive in the market. By contrast, Japanese brands have suffered from a crisis due to quality complaints, and finally lost their advantages.

Secondly, Chinese brands have offered products at lower prices and tried to attract consumers.

Thirdly, the government issued politics (发布政策) to encourage and support car purchases. All these factors have led to the increase in sales of Chinese cars.